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Of romance and hero's
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Of romance and hero's |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of romance and hero's In the quiet of the night Sort the patterns of the day. Bringing life to fantasies In a phantom sort of way. Romance blooms within the heart Hero's come from out the blue. Fear is lost and put aside And the world reshapes anew. Outlandish things are common Extra terrestrial is play, Impossible becomes the norm And the night becomes the day. Dreaming half our lives away There's a balance that is true For the adults of this world Were the children we once Knew. Be you young or be you old, I wish you all your dreams can hold. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a lovely poem, Seymour! I hope you hold all your dreams too. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Thank you so much for the quick response and nice comment. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
We are never too old to dream Seymore. We are nothing without our dreams ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, That's why I wished you all you could hold. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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Rand al'Thor Junior Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 32Rochester, NY, USA |
That poem is short, but it offers much. I liked the reference to the idea that we are all heroes in our dreams. Very nice. ------------------------------------------------- marriage, n.: An old, established institution, entered into by two people deeply in love and desiring to make a committment to each other expressing that love. In short, committment to an institution. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rand, Your comment is heart felt, thank you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
your lines "For the adults of this world Were the children we once Knew" really struck a chord deep within me, Sy. Thanks for reminding me........love this piece........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, Seymour!!! Thank you!  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A beautiful, and quite soothing message, Seymour. Thank you. ------------------ Michael Anderson And so, being young and dipt in folly I fell in love with melancholy, But dreams - of those who dream as I, Aspiringly, are damned, and die: EAP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I really like sharing wave-lengths...good job, again, and again, and again... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Suthern, Michael and Sunshine, Thank you all for your interest and comments. Sorry I did not reply sooner. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
So maybe there is hope for our future! Well wrought Sey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Christopher. There is always hope, thanks for the read and comment. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I like this one, Seymour. But, of course, I like them all! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, I am glad you are my friend, thank you for the sweet comment. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour, such a wonderful poem, I too hope you hold all your dreams ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Right you are, Sy. Things ARE magically transformed at night. You did a very good job with this one. ------------------ Great minds discuss ideals. Average minds discuss events. Small minds discuss people. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel and Balladeer, Thank you for the kind words but reading some of the new people is really humbling. |
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Scribe Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 14Capetown, South Africa |
hold your dreams Seymour ... beautiful piece  ------------------ "just another lost child, trying to find my way" |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
Posts 67 |
I think I have spied a true romantic at heart. :-))) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully done. Left me with a smile in my heart. I am refinding my child. Thankyou for this piece. Marilyn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scribe, Snow and Marilyn, Delighted with your comments, I thought this one had been put to bed. Once again thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice! |
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