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Of romance and hero's

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-22-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Of romance and hero's

In the quiet of the night
Sort the patterns of the day.
Bringing life to fantasies
In a phantom sort of way.

Romance blooms within the heart
Hero's come from out the blue.
Fear is lost and put aside
And the world reshapes anew.

Outlandish things are common
Extra terrestrial is play,
Impossible becomes the norm
And the night becomes the day.

Dreaming half our lives away
There's a balance that is true
For the adults of this world
Were the children we once Knew.

Be you young or be you old,
I wish you all your dreams can hold.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 09-22-1999 11:19 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a lovely poem, Seymour! I hope you hold all your dreams too.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-22-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
Thank you so much for the quick response and nice comment.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-22-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

We are never too old to dream Seymore. We are nothing without our dreams

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-23-1999 08:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
That's why I wished you all you could hold.
Thanks for the read and comment.
Rand al'Thor
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5 posted 09-23-1999 08:47 AM       View Profile for Rand al'Thor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rand al'Thor's Home Page   View IP for Rand al'Thor

That poem is short, but it offers much. I liked the reference to the idea that we are all heroes in our dreams.
Very nice.

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marriage, n.:
An old, established institution, entered into by two people deeply
in love and desiring to make a committment to each other expressing
that love. In short, committment to an institution.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-23-1999 02:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rand,
Your comment is heart felt, thank you.
Pepper
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7 posted 09-23-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

your lines "For the adults of this world Were the children we once Knew" really struck a chord deep within me, Sy. Thanks for reminding me........love this piece........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
suthern
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8 posted 09-23-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is lovely, Seymour!!! Thank you!
Michael
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9 posted 09-23-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A beautiful, and quite soothing message, Seymour. Thank you.

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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


10 posted 09-23-1999 03:32 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I really like sharing wave-lengths...good job, again, and again, and again...
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 09-23-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper, Suthern, Michael and Sunshine,
Thank you all for your interest and comments.
Sorry I did not reply sooner.
Christopher
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12 posted 09-24-1999 12:51 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher


So maybe there is hope for our future!
Well wrought Sey!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 09-24-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Christopher.
There is always hope, thanks for the read and comment.
Denise
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14 posted 09-25-1999 05:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I like this one, Seymour. But, of course, I like them all!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 09-25-1999 10:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder,
I am glad you are my friend, thank you for the sweet comment.
Dark Angel
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16 posted 09-26-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Seymour, such a wonderful poem, I too hope you hold all your dreams

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Balladeer
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17 posted 09-26-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Right you are, Sy. Things ARE magically transformed at night. You did a very good job with this one.

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Great minds discuss ideals. Average minds discuss events. Small minds discuss people.


Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 09-26-1999 10:02 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dark Angel and Balladeer,
Thank you for the kind words but reading some of the new people is really humbling.
Scribe
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19 posted 09-26-1999 10:09 AM       View Profile for Scribe   Email Scribe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Scribe's Home Page   View IP for Scribe

hold your dreams Seymour ...
beautiful piece

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"just another lost child, trying to find my way"
snow in summer
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20 posted 09-28-1999 08:22 PM       View Profile for snow in summer   Email snow in summer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for snow in summer

I think I have spied a true romantic at heart. :-)))
Marilyn
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21 posted 09-28-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Wonderfully done. Left me with a smile in my heart. I am refinding my child. Thankyou for this piece.

Marilyn.
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 09-28-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Scribe, Snow and Marilyn,
Delighted with your comments, I thought this one had been put to bed. Once again thank you.
passing shadows
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nice!
 
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