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Master
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0 posted 09-22-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Licked by the tongues of summer heat
The day burns slowly into ashes
As if a teardrop off the lashes
A drop of ink falls on the sheet
And I, as lonesome as that dot
A single mark upon the page
Sit locked inside an opened cage
In endless space, canít find my spot
I search but do not see a reason
Why in the emptiness of thought
I cannot write a single word?
Why being free I feel imprisoned


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-22-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very good question Master...some can not wirte when happy, some can't stop writing....given my choice, I'd rather remain happy and never write a single word again than to be miserable to write

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Master
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2 posted 09-23-1999 07:01 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THanks I wasn't actually emplying that question, but the beauty is in the eye of the beholder right? Thanks Hoot.

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I fell in love and kept on falling
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-23-1999 08:28 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
C'est la vivre Enjoyed the poem.
Master
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4 posted 09-23-1999 05:05 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THanks Seymour!
Jim Raynor
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5 posted 09-23-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

musta been a pretty hot day hehe its a good poem better than any of mine my poems are ussaly about ???? well i dont know i just think of my life and write mine

-Jim
P.S. Great Poem not Just Good

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$*%Jim Raynor%*$
Master
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6 posted 09-23-1999 05:34 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

THank Jim! That's how I write my poems also. I haven't read your work yet, but I'm sure your poetry is good.
Paul Allen Lupien
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7 posted 09-24-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

I really do like this one Master.Freedom is an inside kind of thing-never a circumstantial one.You made a very interesting point.Also,the multi images provided by a single dot was well done.
Good work.

PAL

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Master
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8 posted 09-24-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Pal!
 
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