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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-22-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

How come you let me in
She was on your mind
She is the one you love
I saw her in the shadows
I felt her on your heart
You and me could never be
i ran away
I fell back inside myself
To where I keep safe
Waiting alone
For the only one
Who knows where is heart lies
Right inside of me

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Iloveit
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since 09-02-99
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NM


1 posted 09-22-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, unfortunately this hits close to a fear I hold in my heart, but still would like to say that it is very well written, conveys the feelings well
Justbleu
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2 posted 09-22-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You Iloveit!!
This was a fear that became reality!!
"HE" says that I let the fear overpower me!!
Maybe so!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


3 posted 09-22-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

This is a good heart felt piece of work!!!
I also would like to take the chance to say
thanks for the two great replies to my
poem it's 12:20, and rain is falling. I
really liked the magic lady with wand in
hand. Just keep in mind that it is because
of lifes experiences, hurts, and even
heartbreaks, and our determined creativity
that lead us to create these beautiful works,
instead of using them to self destruct.
They are our fuel, and our passion.

Richard 33
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 09-22-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

And I wonder how often this really happens...
"How come you let me in
She was on your mind"
... all too often I fear.
Well written bleu
Justbleu
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5 posted 09-22-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thanks!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


Severn
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6 posted 09-22-1999 11:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well done - Justbleu, well done. Like the signature btw.
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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7 posted 09-23-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This is so true. Don't we tend to coil back and hide in ourselves. Very well done!
Justbleu
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8 posted 09-23-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You both Severn and Whtdove!!

Justbleu
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


9 posted 09-25-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

"How come you let me in"
Because you are the one
"She was on your mind"
As are all of my close friends
"She is the one you love"
She is like a sister to me so, yes I do love her
"I saw her in the shadows"
Watching me to protect me from myself
"I felt her on your heart"
She has been on my mind
"You and me could never be"
Because it should be we
"I ran away"
And I have been waiting
"I fell back inside myself"
Come on back out
"To where I keep safe"
I will keep you safe
"Waiting alone"
No one should be alone
"For the only one"
I can be that one, if you like
"Who knows where is heart lies"
I have seen where my heart lies
"Right inside of me"
Right inside of you

Not many of you know who I am besides another poet on this site but if you ask Justbleu, I hope that she will tell you who I am besides just another poet. Part of her screenname was given to her by me.

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
Justbleu
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10 posted 09-26-1999 01:45 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You!! Made me feel special, even if just for a moment!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]
Beki
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11 posted 09-26-1999 04:16 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

That's a pretty hard act to follow, so I guess I'll just say congratulations to you both for finding each other....


I think I may have to stop coming round here...just too depressing to see all these happy happy romantic people finding each other...sigh.....
Justbleu
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12 posted 09-26-1999 10:44 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

You better stay around Miss Beki!!! What would we do without your poetry around here??
Thanks!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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13 posted 09-26-1999 10:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Justbleu.....I loved your reply to Scorched...how romantic......oh, I love to see love in full bloom

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Justbleu
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14 posted 09-26-1999 11:03 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Hoot Thank You as always...

Justbleu
Pepper
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15 posted 09-26-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

sigh....I love a happy ending or should I have said....a new beginning.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Justbleu
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16 posted 09-26-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You Pepper!!!


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]
searchingsoul
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since 09-26-1999
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17 posted 09-26-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for searchingsoul   Email searchingsoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for searchingsoul

justbleu
thats was so well put, how often, sad but true this happens. I'm glad that you finally found the happiness you were looking for, gives hope to others,, great poem
graham
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18 posted 09-26-1999 03:25 PM       View Profile for graham   Email graham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for graham

This is straight from a film script!

I'm very happy for you both!!
johnt300
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19 posted 09-27-1999 08:11 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Hey Justbleu, I liked this. Very nice. Thanks.
Tyson
RainbowGirl
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20 posted 09-27-1999 01:17 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lots of smiles for your new beginning.

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


21 posted 09-28-1999 10:50 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You everyone for all of your wonderful thoughts!! It means a lot!! Some dreams may only last a second!! But, at the present time while something is happening it can bring up the most wonderful feelings in the world!! If only such feelings could last always, forever and...................

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


passing shadows
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22 posted 04-18-2004 02:20 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this is sad, but so beautiful
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