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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-22-1999 01:46 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

you touch me..
you do
with your heart
your mind
whats lost behind
a ray so bright
you lived my light
was i such a burden
a weight so deep
i define sleep
now i hold on to your grace
we now live
i carry you
to some place out of focus
a blurry sight
we make love right




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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


1 posted 09-22-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I liked it!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-22-1999 07:02 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful..."a blurry sight
we make love right"
ah, to be carried out of focus....nicely worded

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
The Keeper Of Keys
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3 posted 09-22-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

i agree with the last reply, "we make love right", great phrase, thats just beautiful.

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To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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