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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-22 01:45 PM


Let me tell you a story
about a girl named Echo Rhayne.
They put her in a mental home
and labeled her insane!

She knew she couldn't fight it,
she knew it must be done.
They threw her in a padded cell
where she could see no sun.

They didn't hear her crying,
they couldn't see her tears.
They kept her locked up in that cell
for two long lonely years.

She begged for them to let her out,
but they ignored her plea.
Could they see what they were doing,
or were they too blind to see?

Two years later down the line,
they finally set her free.
You see I know this all too well
for Echo Rhayne is me!!

© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Sean
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17
Holtville, CA. USA
1 posted 1999-09-22 01:58 PM


And I am glad you are Echo Rhayne, cause I love you sis! When did you write this poem? *huggles* I like how it flows!
EDS
New Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 5
San Diego, CA. USA
2 posted 1999-09-22 02:24 PM


I'm glad you're out! That is definitely a great thing because we all get to read your beautiful poetry! Love ya Echo
Jay_Jay
Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA
3 posted 1999-09-22 02:52 PM


I like it! Good job! *hugs* I love you too Echo!
Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
4 posted 1999-09-22 03:08 PM


hugs from me, echo, great poem, sad story, with a happy ending
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
5 posted 1999-09-22 03:18 PM


Ive been put away, but not for 2 years and the cell wasnt padded......2 years being locked away can drive anyone insane, even if they were perfectly sane when they went in. Happy you finally made it out.n
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-09-22 06:56 PM


Very nicely written Echo...I'm glad you're out and expressing all these feelings in poetry for everyone to appreciate

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
7 posted 1999-09-22 09:57 PM


Systematic Decay...Yes, you are right, anyone locked away for 2 years can go insane even if they weren't insane when they went in there! I know that from experience!
Hoot...Thank you! =) I dont know if anyone appreciates it though!

Sean
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 17
Holtville, CA. USA
8 posted 1999-09-23 12:55 PM


I just wanted to bring you back up to the top Echo. *hugs*
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