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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 09-22-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Let me tell you a story
about a girl named Echo Rhayne.
They put her in a mental home
and labeled her insane!

She knew she couldn't fight it,
she knew it must be done.
They threw her in a padded cell
where she could see no sun.

They didn't hear her crying,
they couldn't see her tears.
They kept her locked up in that cell
for two long lonely years.

She begged for them to let her out,
but they ignored her plea.
Could they see what they were doing,
or were they too blind to see?

Two years later down the line,
they finally set her free.
You see I know this all too well
for Echo Rhayne is me!!
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Sean
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 17
Holtville, CA. USA


1 posted 09-22-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for Sean   Email Sean   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Sean

And I am glad you are Echo Rhayne, cause I love you sis! When did you write this poem? *huggles* I like how it flows!
EDS
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since 09-22-1999
Posts 5
San Diego, CA. USA


2 posted 09-22-1999 02:24 PM       View Profile for EDS   Email EDS   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for EDS

I'm glad you're out! That is definitely a great thing because we all get to read your beautiful poetry! Love ya Echo
Jay_Jay
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since 09-18-99
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA


3 posted 09-22-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Jay_Jay   Email Jay_Jay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jay_Jay

I like it! Good job! *hugs* I love you too Echo!
Iloveit
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since 09-02-99
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4 posted 09-22-1999 03:08 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

hugs from me, echo, great poem, sad story, with a happy ending
Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


5 posted 09-22-1999 03:18 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Ive been put away, but not for 2 years and the cell wasnt padded......2 years being locked away can drive anyone insane, even if they were perfectly sane when they went in. Happy you finally made it out.n
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 09-22-1999 06:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written Echo...I'm glad you're out and expressing all these feelings in poetry for everyone to appreciate

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 09-22-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Systematic Decay...Yes, you are right, anyone locked away for 2 years can go insane even if they weren't insane when they went in there! I know that from experience!
Hoot...Thank you! =) I dont know if anyone appreciates it though!
Sean
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8 posted 09-23-1999 12:55 AM       View Profile for Sean   Email Sean   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Sean

I just wanted to bring you back up to the top Echo. *hugs*
 
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