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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-22-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Star light star bright

I wished upon a scheme
Stroked, in Van Goghs lust
Detailed, Renoirs gleam
Without Picasso's holocaust.

From a sky of blue
Dotted in Surats wile
Weeping painted dew.
A place no man can style.

Deprived of all harass
More then worth its while.
Love in a field of grass
Beyond harasses guile.

But alas, alas
The wished upon scheme
Did not come to pass.
It still remains a dream.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Julie
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1 posted 09-22-1999 01:41 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Cleverly written, Seymour!

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Julie
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Iloveit
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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:54 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

I like this, the way the last lines tie it to the title, very well done
Isis
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3 posted 09-22-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Ditto for me too...such beautiful imagery.

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hoot_owl_rn
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Clever

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Pepper
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5 posted 09-22-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

ingenious.....really like this one Sy........

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-22-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To my true friends above. I thank you from the bottom of my heart.
 
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