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Ixtab
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since 06-23-99
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MEXICAlpan de las tunas


0 posted 09-22-1999 01:00 PM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ixtab

I glance at this deep well
memory and dreams that dwell
inside my sadness into my soul
the breath of past, chill, cold

I stare at unfulfilled dreams
broken paths, downward steps
wings clipped , shoes that weight
feet leave deep marks yet they stink

I see self pity feeding me
worms bare higher dignity
I'm the pig that wallows in stale mud of fate
mud of sadness, hatred, disgusting self hate.
© Copyright 1999 Ixtab - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


1 posted 09-22-1999 01:13 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

So sad...very good though!!

Welcome to Passions!!!

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Iloveit
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since 09-02-99
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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

yep, been there, you will see my footsteps right beside yours, but good thing is you don't have to stay there, here's a hand friend.......
very good poem, but sad subject
Ixtab
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MEXICAlpan de las tunas


3 posted 09-22-1999 02:32 PM       View Profile for Ixtab   Email Ixtab   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ixtab

thanks for your kind words and your hand, i trully appreciate it...

greetings from the 13th heaven
ixtab
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-22-1999 06:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A nice expression of very personal feelings. I think we have all felt this way from time to time. Welcome to the group

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