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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
I glance at this deep well memory and dreams that dwell inside my sadness into my soul the breath of past, chill, cold I stare at unfulfilled dreams broken paths, downward steps wings clipped , shoes that weight feet leave deep marks yet they stink I see self pity feeding me worms bare higher dignity I'm the pig that wallows in stale mud of fate mud of sadness, hatred, disgusting self hate. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So sad...very good though!! Welcome to Passions!!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, been there, you will see my footsteps right beside yours, but good thing is you don't have to stay there, here's a hand friend....... very good poem, but sad subject |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
thanks for your kind words and your hand, i trully appreciate it... greetings from the 13th heaven ixtab |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A nice expression of very personal feelings. I think we have all felt this way from time to time. Welcome to the group ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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