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Tamboril
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since 09-21-1999
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Oxford, Ohio USA


0 posted 09-22-1999 10:12 AM       View Profile for Tamboril   Email Tamboril   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamboril

Another View

Come. Walk with me for a while
You will be amazed at what you see
Place your feet inside my shoes
Am I not, the one you wanted to be
Take a glance, through these eyes of mine
Can you feel what it is you see
Are you sure you still want to be me

Feel the pleasure. Feel the pain
Only I can set you free
Feel the hate. Feel the sorrow
Only I can set you free
This is my anger, this is my suffering
Do you like what it is you see?
Are you sure, it is me that you want to be?

Come. Walk with me for a while
You will be amazed at what you see
Things aren't as they appear to be
Except when they are viewed by me.
© Copyright 1999 Tamboril - All Rights Reserved
The Keeper Of Keys
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since 09-02-99
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1 posted 09-22-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Whoa! That was great, I can almost directly relate. Everyone says how great of a runner i am and how they all wish they could be like me, they dont understand the stress and pressure i have to stand up to. its crazy, i have to be rock solid otherwise everything comes tumbling down...its so hard. great writing

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To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Iloveit
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2 posted 09-22-1999 10:19 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

I liked this, it is something I often say, each of us is different, and a walk in someone elses shoes, would open an eye and a mind for sure

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-22-1999).]
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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3 posted 09-22-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely written...we all see life in a different way

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Poet deVine
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4 posted 09-22-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome! This is the first poem of yours I've read and I must say I'm impressed! I liked this one a lot - poetry with a moral to the story! I look forward to reading more from you.
Toerag
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5 posted 09-22-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Tamboril.....I like this alot also...well done.......God bless anyone that see's life as I see it! 8^)
 
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