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I'll Be OK!!

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-22-1999 05:34 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

When your young you never really see reality
until suddenly your faced with your own mortality.
Then you look at all the things youíve never done.
like play baseball with your 8 yr. old son.

Your daughterís growing fast to your surprise,
you see yourself when you look into her eyes.
Time suddenly seems to pass so very fast
you start to try and make each minute last.

I do not know what future lies ahead.
Trying to understand what all the doctors said.
A demon seems to have latched onto my soul
its funny how fast a cancer can grow.

Its strange for I thought I always knew,
that if faced with this, exactly what Iíd do.
But now it seems that I am so unsure
how to fight this thing, why canít they find a cure.

For now Iíll place my faith into his hands
for I know if no one else can understand.
That God in heaven will always find a way
and with his help, I know Iíll be OK.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 09-22-1999 05:42 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Is this about you? If so or if not...God will be there, He always is. And you are right, if no one else understands, God will...I have lived by that for a long time. For God knows what we are feeling, thinking, doing, everything, before we even do. However, I am sure there are many people who understand exactly what you are talking about in this poem! God bless and love in Christ!...Echo
Michael
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2 posted 09-22-1999 05:46 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Lucie,
I find this heartwrenching for my own personal reasons. I pray this was not about you, if it is, I pray with you and for you.
Keep your faith.

Michael
DreamEvil
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3 posted 09-22-1999 05:54 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Lucie, little darling, I'm here for you as always. My shoulder is dry and my ear is sympathetic. You will be fine and you will get through this with the help of all your friends and family. You are a very brave woman to keep your humour through the trials that you are being faced with. I applaud your resolve and your dignity in dealing with the blows that life has dealt you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 09-22-1999 06:15 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Lucie: I echo the others...

Big hugs sweetheart

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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5 posted 09-22-1999 08:26 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lucie: I don't know if this poem reflects your current situation or not... I do know you're going through some rough times. Hang in there, gal... know that you are loved and appreciated and in our prayers.
Lucie
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6 posted 09-22-1999 10:32 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thank you all for your replies..
DBeth
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7 posted 09-22-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Keep the faith everything will be O.K. You have the strength and the will of everyone here behind you.Chin up Dear One!


DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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8 posted 09-23-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Lucie, you haven't talked to me about this...I had to hear about it from someone else!! Are you OK? Please know I'm here if you want to talk....Luv ya...

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


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