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A Star I've Yet To Hold

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Christopher
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0 posted 09-22-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

A Star I've Yet To Hold


Can you fathom how one misses,
-a star they've yet to hold?
Feel their touch, but not their kisses,
-speak of dreams you've yet to mold?

A thousand million miles away,
-yet they're right before your eyes?
Your tomorrow is their today,
-yet your hearts still synchronize?

Feel the aching beat of your heart,
-contradict the peaceful calm?
Dreaded silence, where you impart,
-a joke to soothe and balm?

In a world so cruel and careless,
-when you find your soul of gold:
You'll understand just how I miss,
-my star that I've yet to hold.
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 09-22-1999 12:42 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is very special...and beautiful!! I hope you find your star!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
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Ah Justbleu, I have. Read some of my other stuff to find my star, the read hers, because she is indeed, my inspiration.
Justbleu
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3 posted 09-22-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

That is great!!!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
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4 posted 09-22-1999 01:31 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I don't know if I should laugh or cry or run around and scream my head off! Thankyou, Chris - I think I'll do all three. Hey, at least you're not alone. Beautiful, beautiful and on..and on.
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5 posted 09-22-1999 07:32 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Christopher, Which poem (or woman) might you be reffering to? It seems I've missed it.

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6 posted 09-22-1999 07:47 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely!
Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-22-1999 08:08 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Christopher, beautiful, absolutly beautiful, I understand,I understand for I have found my soul of gold, My star that I have yet to hold. Would you mind if I printed this ?

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 09-22-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can understand that one Christopher...nicely written. Maybe soon you will hold your star close

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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9 posted 09-22-1999 09:57 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Christopher this was Awesome! Just beautiful! What can I say really? Just awesome!! I loved it!
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Yes Christopher, awesome is the word..
Christopher
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11 posted 09-22-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Thank you all, words of praise from such fine poets as you really leaves me with a big head! (don't listen to severn, I don't have an ego problem... I swear!)

Tara... read on, and you shall see!

Dark Angel- I post my feelings here to share them, I am honored that you wish to share them with others!

Ruth- I already hold her in my heart!

K- I'm not the only one with multiple personalities I see!
Michael
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12 posted 09-22-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I see much in this, Christopher.
'Tis beautifully written. I hope you truly have found your star...your inspiration.



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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP

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13 posted 09-25-1999 05:08 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I missed this....lots of lucky stars out there in our sky..

HUGS

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14 posted 09-25-1999 05:14 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Christopher,
Nice poem. I can relate, too. Still working on that depressing one that you challenged to us all. Where's yours?
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15 posted 09-25-1999 11:24 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Called "Incoherent" John...
caroline
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16 posted 09-25-1999 11:30 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is lovely, Christopher...*sigh*

I wish I could get all of you "Romancers" together at some huge, beautiful bed & breakfast, so all of you could meet your dreams come true! (I'll keep buying lottery tickets! ~*LOL*~)

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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17 posted 04-18-2004 02:54 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome! just awesome!
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