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Love Breakdown -or- Bitten But Not Blue

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Christopher
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0 posted 09-22-1999 12:38 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Christopher

Love Breakdown


Through a
cyclone
of confusion
-I ponder-
the
simplistic complexity
of a
multiple singularity

simple
by nature
it is a
silent
inescapable
attack on the soul

complex
is the outcome
changing forever
viewpoints
goals
and dreams of
solidarity

multiple
occurrences
the assault a
shotgun scatter
surely not an
arrow

singularly
it molds each
union
to a unique
beauteous
realm
of its own
© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-22-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Quantum singularity by any chance? Complex verse my friend, of course.



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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Severn
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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I'm stuttering. This is...is...so you! I'm enriched (more, if possible) by this. The shotgun scatter as opposed to an arrow - wow.
Nicole
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Simplistic complexity of a multiple singularity....Love that part. Christopher, you are a trip! Excellent writing, as always!
hoot_owl_rn
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Very well written....the format does it justice!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Iloveit
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no kidding, very complex, I could never write something this complex, but I love reading yours, great work
Christopher
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Thank you thank you thank you...

You are so me K!

iloveit- never is the foulest word in the english language. Anything is yours, if you only try, and believe.
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This was great Christopher. Described so well. A way with words!
Michael
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8 posted 09-22-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Christopher,
If I were a bug I'd crawl into your ear just to see what's really going on in there!
I found this piece both singularly complex and complexing to my singularity. Loved it.



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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


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