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Lucie
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0 posted 09-21-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I looked into the windows of your soul today.
I saw your fear my love would fade away.
No matter the times I talk and try to reassure
that my love for you sweetheart is deep and pure.

You continue to hold this fear you have so close to you
a barrier you hold up against me hurting you.
After all this time my love, do you not realize?
Or see the love I have for you within my eyes?

Forever you hide behind this wall your building.
Perhaps it just your way to stop the feeling.
But you should know no matter what you do
that I could never see myself not loving you.

For you are the other half that makes me whole
the life long awaited mate to my inner soul.
There is no other that could take my love from you
so let down your guard and let yourself love me too.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-22-1999 02:12 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh, dear this is lovely! A wonderful love poem! I like this one, hope you gave it to your hubby!
DreamEvil
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2 posted 09-22-1999 02:17 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Lucie you did well with your verse but even better with your dealing with the current situation. Proud of you I am.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Beki
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3 posted 09-22-1999 02:33 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Beautiful entreaty Lucie. :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-22-1999 02:53 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Lucie, this is fabulous....very touching and beautiful. Hey, my e-mail has been down, I hope you've been missing me !! ARGH ! If it's not Michael, it's mail !! he he he Hoping to get it back before I start my move...will miss you desperately if I don't !! Hope you're hanging in there???

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-22-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely done Lucie!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
WhtDove
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6 posted 09-22-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Lucie, I loved this one! Very touching!
Iloveit
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7 posted 09-22-1999 10:23 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

I agree, very touching great work
Michael
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8 posted 09-22-1999 10:51 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A lovely sentiment, Lucie.
Love has a way of breaking down barriers, hang in there...



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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 09-22-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lucie,
You said it well and I enjoyed the read.
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