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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-21 11:27 PM

I looked into the windows of your soul today.
I saw your fear my love would fade away.
No matter the times I talk and try to reassure
that my love for you sweetheart is deep and pure.

You continue to hold this fear you have so close to you
a barrier you hold up against me hurting you.
After all this time my love, do you not realize?
Or see the love I have for you within my eyes?

Forever you hide behind this wall your building.
Perhaps it just your way to stop the feeling.
But you should know no matter what you do
that I could never see myself not loving you.

For you are the other half that makes me whole
the life long awaited mate to my inner soul.
There is no other that could take my love from you
so let down your guard and let yourself love me too.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-09-22 02:12 AM

Oh, dear this is lovely! A wonderful love poem! I like this one, hope you gave it to your hubby!

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-09-22 02:17 AM

Lucie you did well with your verse but even better with your dealing with the current situation. Proud of you I am.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 1999-09-22 02:33 AM

Beautiful entreaty Lucie. :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

4 posted 1999-09-22 02:53 AM

Lucie, this is fabulous....very touching and beautiful. Hey, my e-mail has been down, I hope you've been missing me !! ARGH ! If it's not Michael, it's mail !! he he he Hoping to get it back before I start my move...will miss you desperately if I don't !! Hope you're hanging in there???

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-09-22 09:56 AM

Very nicely done Lucie!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

6 posted 1999-09-22 10:15 AM

Lucie, I loved this one! Very touching!

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

7 posted 1999-09-22 10:23 AM

I agree, very touching

great work

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 1999-09-22 10:51 PM

A lovely sentiment, Lucie.
Love has a way of breaking down barriers, hang in there...

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Michael Anderson

And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:

EAP

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 1999-09-22 10:59 PM

Lucie,
You said it well and I enjoyed the read.

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