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@>-^----- through the eyes of a child

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loverbaby
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0 posted 09-21-1999 10:56 PM       View Profile for loverbaby   Email loverbaby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for loverbaby

~~Please tell me what you think~~
He touches her but she doesn't scream she doesn't say a word
she just recalls the threats that she heard
but to this girl it seems only normal
cause it happens more then once in a while
but thats how it's seen through the eyes of a child
~*
he see's his mama being hit by his daddy
but to him it's only right
cause he see's it happen close to every night
he is scared of his daddy
and thats putting it mild
but thats how it is seen
through the eyes of a child.
~*
she wanders the dirty streets afraid
and alone
just wondering if she has a place to call her home
see her mother lost her job again
just the other day
they don't have any money
yet there are bills to pay
her mommy is a saint
although the drugs turn her wild
but thats how it is seen
throught the eyes of a child

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Lucie
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1 posted 09-22-1999 10:51 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

This is an intense poem.. you touched many emotions here. Nicely done.
Justbleu
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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:16 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Wow...there are sooo many children out there that have probably felt these...sooo sad!! Yes, I agree with Lucie...quite intense!!

Justbleu

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 09-22-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is a good commentary on today's atrocities, LB. Good job.
Pepper
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loverbaby..I agree with both Lucie and Justblue; intense is the emotion that came to mind when reading this piece....written well.....

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