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Who Am I?

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 09-21-1999 03:05 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is a poem in response to Systematic Decay's 'describe yourself' challenge. I accidently hit the post new topic instead of the post reply and didnt realize LoL. Anyways...here goes nothing.


Who am I?
That's a silly question.
I am me!
Who is that?
Well since you ask, that is who I am!
What does that mean?
Well, now that you mention it, I'm not quite sure.
I am me! That is to say.
I am when I am me.
Is that OK?
You see, if you don't agree, I can be whatever you want.
Who would you like?
What would you like?
What is it that you wish me to be?
Just myself?
What do you mean?
Which me is that?
Who am I?
Well, now that I stop to think, I guess I'm not so sure.
I am who you need.
I am what you want.
So, which me will it be? W
ho am I?
I guess I can only say,
I am who you see!

[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 09-21-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Ron
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1 posted 09-21-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

* moved from Poetry Challenge - it's too good to lanquish over there by itself...
Iloveit
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2 posted 09-21-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

I like it, a lot!...whoever you are! lol
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-21-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm glad Ron moved this here for us. I guess all I can say is I find it very interesting. Most pledge to be the person you don't see and here you are professing the opposite. I think that's important, to let people see the real you!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 09-21-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thanks Ron for moving it =)
Iloveit...Thank you
Hoot...I don't believe in being anything that I am not, therefore I can not say I am somethign I am not. I am what everyone see's and that is the true me!
 
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