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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-21-1999 04:44 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

The heart of this poet…

If I were to say that I live
to write poems
it would be a lie
but if I were to say that
poems live in me
and are written from my heart
it would be only fact

If I were to say I was blown away
by your touch
it would be a lie
for I would have to say instead
that by your touch
I was made whole

If I were to say only
that I need you
it would be lie
for I miss you at least as much…
and want you
even more…


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©1999 Iloveit

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 09-21-1999 04:49 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I could not agree with you more! Very well said!
RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-21-1999 05:03 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ILoveit

If I were to say how much I care, you'd trust in the knowledge that I do!

Don't even ask where that came from...somewhere deep inside...

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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3 posted 09-21-1999 05:20 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I love this... especially the second verse... Made whole... isn't that what we're all searching for? *S* Great job!
Iloveit
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4 posted 09-21-1999 05:26 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks echo, glad you liked it, I write only when my heart is inspired and this one came out easy, and knowing the inspiration, I know why

RG, and yep, I do understand and I do believe!

suthern, yep....sigh....yep you are right there
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-21-1999 08:05 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiles...sounds like another has been bitten by that elusive bug thats running amuck here on passions

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Nan
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6 posted 09-21-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Big smiles
Christopher
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7 posted 09-21-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

What else can I say...
except:
Exactly!
Bravo!
Balladeer
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8 posted 09-21-1999 10:36 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I love it, Iloveit. (How can one resist not saying that?)
JTF
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9 posted 09-22-1999 05:00 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

The heart of this poet ... is a big one ... and one which is worth knowing ...
Iloveit
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10 posted 09-22-1999 09:37 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

hoot, Nan, Chris thanks glad you liked

Balladeer, thanks, and I know that's why I chose that name, it describes a love for life, and so very well describes how we feel about a good poem!, so thanks again for the compliment

thanks JTF, am pretty fond of your heart too!
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