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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
The heart of this poet… If I were to say that I live to write poems it would be a lie but if I were to say that poems live in me and are written from my heart it would be only fact If I were to say I was blown away by your touch it would be a lie for I would have to say instead that by your touch I was made whole If I were to say only that I need you it would be lie for I miss you at least as much… and want you even more… ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I could not agree with you more! Very well said! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ILoveit If I were to say how much I care, you'd trust in the knowledge that I do! Don't even ask where that came from...somewhere deep inside... HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this... especially the second verse... Made whole... isn't that what we're all searching for? *S* Great job! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks echo, glad you liked it, I write only when my heart is inspired and this one came out easy, and knowing the inspiration, I know why  RG, and yep, I do understand and I do believe! suthern, yep....sigh....yep you are right there |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiles...sounds like another has been bitten by that elusive bug thats running amuck here on passions ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Big smiles  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
What else can I say... except: Exactly! Bravo! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love it, Iloveit. (How can one resist not saying that?) |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
The heart of this poet ... is a big one ... and one which is worth knowing ... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hoot, Nan, Chris thanks glad you likedBalladeer, thanks, and I know that's why I chose that name, it describes a love for life, and so very well describes how we feel about a good poem!, so thanks again for the compliment thanks JTF, am pretty fond of your heart too! |
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