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Lucie
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0 posted 09-21-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I think I am ordinary
you say that Iím extraordinary.
But I am just the me I am.

You think that I am willing,
know my friendship is fulfilling,
but I am just doing the best I can.

You said that its OK,
that I should have my say,
but you are just humoring me now.

You say that I am caring,
my love Iím always sharing,
youíd be surprised if I said I donít know how.

You do not see my soul,
you just think you know,
but I am not the person that you see.

I am lost and always running,
my thoughts are always cunning,
so you do not really know the all of me.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 09-21-1999 04:12 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Ah, and well I know the pain and apprehension involved, in letting someone seeing the true depths of your soul! But I must say, that once that line is crossed, it provides a singular feeling of fulfillment never found elsewhere.
Very well written poignant tale Lucie!
Thank you for the memory!
Pepper
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2 posted 09-21-1999 04:19 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

heart-whole......beautiful read Lucie..........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 09-21-1999 04:22 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Lucie, this is exquisite! I swear you and I are sisters or something...I've had these very thoughts run through my mind...the last 2 stanzas are me exactly...this makes me sad, actually. But I find comfort knowing you understand my very thoughts....love ya girl.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Lucie
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4 posted 09-21-1999 04:26 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Well soul sister.. we need to get busy on some poetry for our favorite forum then.. I'm feeling erotic today.. heheh.. look out adult forum..hahha
Iloveit
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5 posted 09-21-1999 04:26 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

really great poem! love the way your write, you get your point across so clearly!
Lucie
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6 posted 09-21-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Thanks for your reply.. Wish I really did get my point across in regular conversation.. Maybe if I just write everything... hmmm..
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7 posted 09-21-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'll alway be one of the ones saying you're extraordinary.
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