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World (repost requested by my inspiration)
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World (repost requested by my inspiration) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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World a lonely man stares at a compelling vision of nothingness consumed by the big empty, he retreats from awareness, alone patient no more, he waits again always awake and never here a world of his own, he would share, and yet no one else can see will he be here, forever lonely, afraid, secluded, happy, insane is it fate, or does he control his destiny, is it by whim or choice who is sane, and who is not, is it we who live in a world of pain or is it he, who lives in a world of his design, world of his desires shall he sit forever, in charge of what he sees, who he would love perhaps it is he then, who shall succeed, with the power to create he who makes his rules, and plays with only those that he chooses it is a game to him, reality meaning nothing inside his mind's eye so, he sits and he stares at a compelling vision of nothingness, alone |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow, Christopher...you've taken a moment in time, and explored every thought...every idea... Made me actually see "the wheels turning".... Fabulous read...oh, and keep blushing, the secrets out ! I knew it ! Read my comment on her piece to you...  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wonderful!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
As ever, I am left in awe at your depths. I know that world you're in. I love the way you linked the first and last lines, and the whole way you structured it. Thanks for the repost! |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you PFF, I did, and I'm still blushing! I always appreciate your praise ruth Severn, you have yet to scratch the surface of my mind, but the door is open, only for you |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That is sooo sweet, You 2!! You both write so beautifully!!!!!  ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Well, well, Christopher shows his soft side more and more. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
well, thank goodness for that, or I would be bereft. |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Yes, but a warning... I have recieved a few challenges lately, and feel the humid breath of my demons brathing down my neck! Darkness, shall return. (But K- you always get to see my soft side!) |
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