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Femme-fatal

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-21-1999 03:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Femme-fatal

She struck me a Medusa's cast
Thrown in a blast of icy stare
That froze me like an icicle
Upside down in the winters air.

I could not turn or run or dodge
Nor could I beg or move as prey
I could only feel frigid eyes
That would not let me melt away.

She's froze the tailings of my heart
Tattooed her image on my eyes.
Wicked in their consequence
It's a hell of a way to die.

And now my essence stands condemned
Compressed in icy form to wait
Unable too utter warning cries
To future souls drawn to her gate.

Rooted solid in white frostbite
Left with only dreams at night.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Iloveit
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1 posted 09-21-1999 03:55 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

now that is one killer chick.....lol, no really well done, I like this one, great description!
poetFemmeFatale
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2 posted 09-21-1999 04:01 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Now Seymour, you and I have to talk....Please tell me this isn't about me ! I have always only admired you and your talents! Tell me I have never hurt you in this frigid way.....maybe this was a poem with no relation to me, but the title obviously caught my eye....and now I sit here and wonder !!?? E-mail me if you wish to....please? Curiosity is pulsing through my veins!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Skyfyre
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3 posted 09-21-1999 04:05 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

My my ... sounds like a few of the ladies from my old neighborhood ... LOL

Really, Seymour, this is great ... it really painted a picture for me ... "tatooed her image on my eyes ... it's a hell of a way to die"

Wonderful, as usual ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 09-21-1999 04:06 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Sey- loved "I could only feel frigid eyes
That would not let me melt away."
well done...
PFF- I doubt it was about you...your words have a tendency to be on the "warmer" side!

Magnificent Sey!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-21-1999 06:38 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PFF,
This was a tongue in cheek fun poem. I love you and love your writing. It is a revised poem that I wrote some time ago. You are and always will be a pff to me. *L*
Michael
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6 posted 09-21-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, if indeed this was posted for FemmeFatale, I heed your warnings Seymour but am quite compelled to take my chances. She may be the death of us all - but oh, what a way to go. Seriously, I think I have met the woman you did write this about. Good poem.



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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-21-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"Your as cold as ice...." Ah, good one Seymore. Have met a few men like this as well

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-21-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot and Michael,
Didn't expect to get into trouble with this poem. Forgot about pFF's non de plume. This poem had nothing to do with her. Wouldn't want to rouse the queen Bee.
Balladeer
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9 posted 09-21-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, I think it's accurate, Sy. When you're turned to ice you're hard and stiff, no? PFF can certainly do that to a man without breaking a sweat.
poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 09-22-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

He he ha ha ! You guys all crack me up ! I feel like I'm in the Men's bathroom listening to you all talk about me! It's great!!!!

You are all too sweet ! If I was Mormon, I'd marry each and every one of you ! he he he (kidding) One man is all I can handle at a time. That would be near fatal! Although, this gives me inspiration for a poem in Adult....LOL Sure love all my fans !! ****curtsies and hugs all !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 09-22-1999 08:46 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

pFF and Balladeer,
I didn't think turning to ice could be so much fun. I'm glad I posted it now. Love you all.
 
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