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Wish i lived there

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-21-1999 02:03 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

dont you know
the worlds in her eyes
its not too late
better realize
dont turn your back on her again
pride you love
dont lose her my friend
i never had the chance
im left wishing
while i watch you stop
watch you stall
speak your heart
forget the crowd
shield your mind
love her divine
do it for me if nothing else
i want to see you happy
like the world
spinning in her eyes..
so clear..
wish i lived there..




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1 posted 09-21-1999 03:11 PM       View Profile for roxane   Email roxane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for roxane

i hope that i am not bothering you with all the replies, but i have come to look for your name. your poetry is so comfortable to me. it is so well-written, the words just flow into my mind and they all make sense at once. the images are so vivid and yet so bleak. i'm anxious to read more.
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 09-21-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Jackal, a heart-wrenching tale of unrequited love!
Sniff!
Well done!
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