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Satiate

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Alicat
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0 posted 09-21-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Satiate


Addicted am I found
Though she's not around
Timidly watching the clock
Slicing seconds to tick and tock
Time dragging its schoolboy feet
Until the moment we can meet
A longing, a need keeps me awake
And my heart does palpitate
Waiting for my Satiate

Naked fear waits within
Even after I land at ten
Will she want me? Yes or no
Hoping that my tears won't flow
For not often do I cry
Save when soft words bring them nigh
Even now I tremble and quake
As my thoughts illuminate
The visage of my Satiate

And I know such wonderous love
Is a gift from God above
With comfort both sublime, surreal
I to her secrets reveal
And from such our love grows stronger
Though the days do seem much longer
So very hard, yet still I wait
To stand before my boarding gate
And fly the sky to Satiate

Found in love, kit and kaboodle
Longing for my sNikkidoodle
Chestnut tresses, storm-green eyes
Across the sky-bowl my love lies
Both our stomachs will syncro-flip
When my plane pulls in the slip
Then will end my lifelong wait
Long I've searched for my soul-mate
Finding such in Satiate


Alicat, the lovestruck kilted kitty

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 09-21-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-21-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Smiling...very romantic and it seems that love bug has bitten yet another of Passions couples

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Iloveit
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2 posted 09-21-1999 11:46 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

sorry....didn't see your request to hold the posting.....*hopes satiate comes quickly to see this beautiful work*

very beautiful, am thinking of making reservations to go see a cherished friend, so I know just what you speak of, very beautifully done!

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-21-1999).]
Nicole
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3 posted 09-21-1999 11:50 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I want to reply...but you have stolen my words and left me speechless. Thank you so very much for this, sug.
Nan
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4 posted 09-21-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

LOL - Never let it be said that I don't take direction well - even though I don't - I liked it this morning, and I like it now...
Christopher
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5 posted 09-21-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Awwww... in't that sweet???
J/K you, this is marvelous!
I only dream of the day I step on my plane!
Alicat
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6 posted 09-24-1999 04:31 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Thank you everyone for the heartfelt replies.
Chris...yeah, man, that anticipation is gonna be strong.
Nan...it's ok...I was the kinda kid who would start on model planes, get stuck, then read the instructions.
Iloveit and hoot_owl...thank you both for such tender words.

Satiate...you know my love transcends the physcical world...find me there.

Alicat
Munda
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7 posted 03-05-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

uhhhhh 35 ?
 
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