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Ayla
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since 08-31-99
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0 posted 09-21-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Nobody would understand
how much he means to me.
He's more than just a friend,
Someone I've fallen in love with.
His smile melts my heart,
making me weak in the knees.
He's different from the others,
Something's special about him.
Everything seems perfect,
It's like we're meant to be.
But there's one problem,
My love for him he could not see.
I just hope that someday
he'd will understand.
I want him to be
my lover and my friend.


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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..
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DBeth
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1 posted 09-21-1999 09:43 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Very nice poem Ayla.We have all been there at one time or another.
Good job!!

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When we give of ourselves
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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-21-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice...kida getting partial to these love poems here

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-21-1999 10:04 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Ayla,
Have to agree with Hoot, enjoyed the read.
Ayla
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4 posted 09-22-1999 04:25 AM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Thanks for all of your kind comments..

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