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johnt300
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0 posted 1999-09-21 05:52 AM


Invisible Friendship


How long the hours, years,
Before we will touch?

Feel our invisible friendship of many long miles,
Always with you at its vivid center.

Yes,
But,
While the grace of your sensual neck,
Your curves, your lines, your sweet lips,
Are all in one motion...
All are unknown to me.

Your photo booth picture of a lovely, lonely you,
Reaching me over airwaves unaware.
I place you beside your words.
One way windows baring me your soul,
All I have of your soul.

I still can not see you in my dreams
each night,
Though you have promised me,
You will be there.

So please, will you accomany me,
Down our heavy, worded path,
Revealing every hard secret,
Every soft moment,
Our intimate exchange of ideas and hopes.

We will ride this invisible wave of friendship,
You and I,
Rising and falling,
Through peaks and valleys,
Across mountains and time,
Without ever resting our eyes,
Save on one another.

To my poetic inspiration...always.



© Copyright 1999 johnt300 - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
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1 posted 1999-09-21 06:33 AM


lovely John......as of late,in this forum, it proves just how powerful "the word" can be, with all the wonderful friendships that have developed....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

BrightLight
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since 1999-09-07
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2 posted 1999-09-21 07:14 AM


beautiful.
johnt300
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3 posted 1999-09-21 09:03 AM


BrightLight,
Thank you. Take care.
Tyson

johnt300
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4 posted 1999-09-21 09:18 AM


Pepper,
Thank you for your reply, and I agree with you about this forum. I'm very glad to be able to move people on this site, and also develop some strong friendships along the way. Thanks again.
Tyson

suthern
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5 posted 1999-09-21 09:18 AM


Well done... it's amazing how close hearts can grow together across vast distances.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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6 posted 1999-09-21 10:00 AM


Tyson...you simply have me in tears again. It is so beautiful. I am sitting here simply amazed at the impact your words have on me. I can't help but be in awe of this force that has drawn us together over all these miles and through all these years of heartache and longing. How I long to be there with you in your dreams and even more in your arms. Words can not say what I feel right now.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
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san diego, ca.
7 posted 1999-09-21 09:46 PM


Suthern,
Thank you very much, and I agree 100 percent.
Tyson

Ruth,
Well, there it is. I am very glad you liked this one, too. I wrote it quickly and felt hasty when I posted it. I'm glad it turned out right for you. Take care.
Tyson

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-09-21 09:50 PM


Tyson...for quick and hasty, it most certainly worked well

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Christopher
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9 posted 1999-09-21 09:53 PM


GROUP HUG EVERYBODY!!!

Here's to beautiful friendship, beautifully worded tyson!

Christopher

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
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san diego, ca.
10 posted 1999-09-22 06:59 AM


Ruth,
Thank you once again. Talk to you soon. Take care.
Tyson

Christopher,
Thank you very much. Cheers.
Tyson

moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 277
TX , USA
11 posted 1999-09-22 01:14 PM



I agree with the rest...ITs amazing how powerful words can touch your hearts stings... Well written..

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
Posts 214
san diego, ca.
12 posted 1999-09-22 10:18 PM


Moonmoon,
Thank you for your reply. Much appreciated and glad you agree.
Tyson

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