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When You Think

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-21-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

When you are feeling lonely and you think you canít go on.
Turn and see my loving smile in the coming of the dawn.
When you think that you canít go on and take another step.
Look upon the dew kissed roses and know for you Iíve wept.

When you are feeling all alone without a single friend.
Feel my kisses that I send to you upon the gentle wind.
When you think you canít rise up to face another day alone.
Look upon the wild flowers that from wayward seeds have grown.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-21-1999 01:18 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Indeed, I will.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Pepper
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2 posted 09-21-1999 01:47 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

a friendship as portrayed here is surely a treasure....I love this Lucie.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-21-1999 01:52 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lucie, wow, this is absolutley beautiful, mind if I print it out and share it with friends? I'd like to keep it in my folder.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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4 posted 09-21-1999 02:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Actually I'd like to hang it up

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Michael
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5 posted 09-21-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Sweet elegance, Lucie
You have a beautiful style.

Michael
Lucie
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6 posted 09-21-1999 10:07 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Dark Angel I would be honored.

Thank you all for your replies.
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7 posted 09-21-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Lovely, Lucie!!!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-21-1999 10:21 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lucie,
With this poem I dub you a poet.
Excellent.
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 09-21-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderfully written Lucie....thanks for posting

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Lucie
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10 posted 09-21-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Oh geesh Seymour was that all it took? Dang.. guess all that other stuff I been writing all this time was nothing?
DBeth
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11 posted 09-21-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Well done Lucie! Very lovely poem! It grabs you by your heart strings.Brought a tear to my eye.

DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.
pandora
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12 posted 09-21-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

Enjoyable sentiment. Thanks for sharing this well written piece.

-pan
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