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Unbound (repost at Lucie's request)

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-20-1999 11:56 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The heat of their bodies dispelling the chill.

Between them an eagerness stands, filled with fear.

Turning to him, probing his eyes, she finds love.

Revealed by her own eyes, he sees a yearning.

Together, as one, the decision is made.

As their lips touch, their love springs to it's full bloom.

On a rock, rising above the Sea they lie.

They consummate their love here, for all to see.

The fire met, he lays his head upon her breast.

With his hand upon her silken thighs, she cries.

As tender as a dove, he wipes her tears aside.

In answer to his touch, she faces the Sea.

As one they stand, both feeling their fulfillment.

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The night beckons, calling them to it's embrace.

Stepping from the rock, their lips touch, their last kiss.

As they kiss, the Sea takes them in it's embrace.

(c)1999 DreamEvil


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Starith
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1 posted 09-21-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Wow...this is beautiful...simply beautiful...to say any more would just ruin it's beauty.

Star

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Lucie
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2 posted 09-21-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Oh Dream!! I love this.. Thank you so much for reposting it.. I am sorry that I missed it the first time. It reminds me of a situation in my own life that was special to me.. I will print it and save it always.. again... thank you!
Beki
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3 posted 09-21-1999 12:05 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

It was beautiful...but if their encounter was so perfect, why leap to their death? I am baffled.....
Pepper
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4 posted 09-21-1999 12:39 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very beautiful indeed DE, but I am also curiuos about the ending.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Christopher
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5 posted 09-21-1999 01:23 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Then he has indeed shown his true gift pepper, for the sign of a true writer, is to leave the reader longing to hear more.
As I do!
Well done friend!
Nicely placed with form matching mood!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 09-21-1999 10:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...beautiful!!! I look forward to this day myself. I hope it happens soon for you and one voice.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 09-21-1999 10:25 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

DreamEvil,
Once again you make me think and drift back.
Excellent.
WhtDove
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8 posted 09-21-1999 10:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I do believe I missed this too, hmmn.
Very nice indeed!
DreamEvil
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9 posted 09-21-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all, though I wonder at my ability to craft blank and free verse.
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