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Julie
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0 posted 09-20-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

CAPTURED

Engagement of a grin,

Embraced inducement,

Bewitching enticement.

Lips dripping words

Petitioning to seduce.

Touch as warm as cobalt blue,

Appetites plotting pursuit,

Starvation its witness,

Submission compulsively danced.

Darkened eyes lead to confess,

Caresses shielding nights hostile rages.

Ballads of enchanted sensations,

Asylum of shadowed intensity;

Phantom's erotic capture.

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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-22-1999 10:24 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A poem that says a lot in a few lines! Ballads of enchanted sensations is a great line! And I like your Shakespeare quote. I found this on page 2 of the Forum so I thought it deserved to be brought back to the top!
Lucie
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2 posted 09-22-1999 10:54 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I agree with deVine.. this definately deserves a second look! Nice..
Julie
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3 posted 09-22-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you both for your kind comments.
It did give me a giggle tho', Shakesperian
quote...that came right from my own head
and my handy thesaurus.

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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


WhtDove
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4 posted 09-22-1999 12:38 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Lips dripping words, quite a unique line there! Very good!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-22-1999 01:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
Well done enjoyed the read.
Julie
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6 posted 09-22-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Seymour and WhtDve, I was begining to think if it didn't rhyme it wasn't poetry.
Do you guys have that trouble?

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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


Iloveit
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7 posted 09-22-1999 01:32 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

PDV thanks for bringing this back, I know I read it yesterday, but didn't get to reply, sometimes work calls me away from my play lol, I liked it, it is one that the reader can see action, witout graphic descriptions, very nice!
Julie
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8 posted 09-22-1999 02:06 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you lloveit. Glad you enjoyed it.

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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


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9 posted 09-22-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I very much liked this line

"Petitioning to seduce"

given my line of work. Well done, Julie!
Julie
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10 posted 09-23-1999 01:57 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Gotcha Sunshine. Anything I can do
for a friend.

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