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Haven't posted in a while...figured I'd give you a double dose.

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Starith
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since 08-18-99
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Leesburg, FL USA


0 posted 09-20-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

I sleep on a bed of nails
I walk barefoot on broken glass
I carry it like water in pails
I watch hopelessly as it spills-I simply sigh "alas"

Always pain
That's all I feel
That's all that remains
This hurt--so real

How long must I go on
Loving you as I do
You played my like some pawn
Then you said we were through

I've tried so hard to hate you
Yet still, this love remains
I can't seem to forget you
But with "you" comes the pain

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Skyfyre
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since 08-15-99
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


1 posted 09-20-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I notice you didn't name it ... how about "Bittersweet"? For that, this love surely is ...

This too shall pass ...

Nocht
Starith
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Posts 181
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2 posted 09-21-1999 01:10 AM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thank you Nocth...this means a lot to me...you know what I mean...you are a true friend.

Star

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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3 posted 09-21-1999 10:30 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow.....this is very good. I can feel this one!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Starith
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Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


4 posted 09-21-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Hoot thank you for your words of praise...I appreciate them so...though you speak few words they mean much because I respect you so as a poet.

Thank you again.

Star

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