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Haven't posted in a while...figured I'd give you a double dose.
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Haven't posted in a while...figured I'd give you a double dose. |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
I sleep on a bed of nails I walk barefoot on broken glass I carry it like water in pails I watch hopelessly as it spills-I simply sigh "alas" Always pain That's all I feel That's all that remains This hurt--so real How long must I go on Loving you as I do You played my like some pawn Then you said we were through I've tried so hard to hate you Yet still, this love remains I can't seem to forget you But with "you" comes the pain ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I notice you didn't name it ... how about "Bittersweet"? For that, this love surely is ... This too shall pass ... Nocht |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Thank you Nocth...this means a lot to me...you know what I mean...you are a true friend. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow.....this is very good. I can feel this one! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Hoot thank you for your words of praise...I appreciate them so...though you speak few words they mean much because I respect you so as a poet. Thank you again. Star ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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