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A Response For My Inspirer

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Severn
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0 posted 09-20-1999 11:12 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Severn

Through your ever silent touch, evolves my truthful means to be.
Not just of the breath...or the sense of moving limbs (God Given?)-
No, but the will and courage to feel. Vapid? Never!
Joy's gift, these words I love, grown brighter with your 'voice' inspiring-
I'm forced. Full. Collect myself! Forgetten where I am! So lost.
What flame is this? A cliche so appropriate, it explains it most,
This sweet impossibility, it's true. Existing where our worlds meet...
Conflict! But never bitterness, so usual in colliding views...
In heartfelt awe, I'm found, by the strength of demonised prose.
Such sagacity...I never (repetition) dream to match.
I'm only coloured glass...turning round, afraid to settle-
Yet, still, I rest. If one valid point is ever to surface...
Then gossamer wings we possess. Chains? Gone. we are free.
I found you on the earth, yet among the stars you are. Shine on.

20.9.99 KM
© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-20-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Delightfully done, dear Lady! I'm sure he will enjoy being an inspiration to you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilŠ

Christopher
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2 posted 09-20-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Now I am the one who is wordless.
How can I respond to that, other than to say that perhaps there exist more than only our demons, as long as you join me among the stars.
Michael
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3 posted 09-20-1999 11:43 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exquisite piece, Severn
Well done.

Michael
Pepper
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4 posted 09-20-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

oh Severn....you sure have a magical way with words......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Isis
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5 posted 09-20-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Severn, I agree reading your stuff sometimes is like partaking of a magic spell or something else equally as wonderful!!

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Poet deVine
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6 posted 09-21-1999 12:05 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautifully written! I always like to put 'art' with my poetry but yours has painted a picture of its own here!
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-21-1999 10:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful...and am smiling here, another of the Passions couples exposed

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Christopher
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8 posted 09-21-1999 03:04 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

(blushing a furious shade of crimson)
Whatever are you talking about Ruth???
poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 09-21-1999 04:08 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I knew it - I knew it....!!!! Golly, I'm good!

I witnessed them "debating" quite some time back, and immediately knew she'd stolen him from me !!!! Tis true, tis true, and what a powerful team they are ! Like bianary stars....

Exquisite piece my dearest Severn ! Beauty as always in your words.....isn't this quite a trip? Hey, if you need to borrow my "bug spray", well, never mind that...it's too late ! he he he Wasn't using mine either that day I bumped into Michael....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Christopher
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10 posted 09-21-1999 04:15 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Indeed PFF, she "pounced" upon me whilst my back was turned! Believe me though, twas no lacking on your part! Michael is indeed a lucky man as he well knows!
But, soulmates aren't chosen, they simply are.
Severn
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11 posted 09-21-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Dear me, now I'm the one who's blushing.
Thankyou all so much!

Femme - I don't really want that spray...

My inspiration - your invitation is so gladly accepted.
x several million.
Christopher
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12 posted 09-22-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

See what I have to put up with???
She has to keep on trying to beat me, when we both know full well that I always win. And I can prove it in a single statement:
I have her.
Justbleu
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13 posted 09-22-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Wow!!! What a way with words there!!! Very nice!!



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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

Severn
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14 posted 09-22-1999 01:25 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ah Christopher, but I have you - so what are we going to do? Just like true and false statements perhaps we cancel each other out!
Christopher
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15 posted 09-22-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Au contrair mi amour, perhaps then we confirm one another.
Severn
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16 posted 09-22-1999 01:34 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Touche.
(Just one!)
Dark Angel
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17 posted 07-10-2001 11:38 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I found you on the earth, yet among the stars you are. Shine on.

I love this line the best!

Maree  

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

 
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