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Relationship Building

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jfkinyon
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Relationship Building

It is he
it seems you've been eyeing
the one who makes women's hearts
long for meaning

he's that vacant building
across the street

a real fixer-upper...

It's the past that's left him
in this condition

a little TLC and he'll be
as good as you

nevermind
that he's been condemned.



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Beki
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OH excellent my friend, excellent! A real zinger...so well said! :-)

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