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jfkinyon
Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 34
Burbank, CA. USA

0 posted 1999-09-20 10:32 PM


Relationship Building

It is he
it seems you've been eyeing
the one who makes women's hearts
long for meaning

he's that vacant building
across the street

a real fixer-upper...

It's the past that's left him
in this condition

a little TLC and he'll be
as good as you

nevermind
that he's been condemned.



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J. F. Kinyon

copyright 1999
all rights reserved


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Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-09-20 10:51 PM


OH excellent my friend, excellent! A real zinger...so well said! :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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