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LOST IN LOVE
New Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 3
COLUMBIA PA USA

0 posted 1999-09-20 10:01 PM


I DONT KNOW WHERE TO START,SO I'LL SAY WHATS IN MY HEART
IM LONGING FOR YOUR TENDER TOUCH,AND OH,HOW I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
SITTING AROUND WITH NOTHING TO DO,THINKING OF MY LOVE FOR YOU THAT IS ALL SO TRUE.
NOW THAT I'VE SAID WHATS IN MY HEART,I GUESS I REALLY DID KNOW WHERE TO START. OH,HOW I'VE LONGED FOR YOUR TENDER TOUCH,GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
I'M STILL SITTING HERE WITH NOTHING TO DO,AND OH HOW I WISH THAT I WAS WITH YOU.
REMEMBER ALWAYS AND FOREVER THAT I LOVE YOU AND ALWAYS WILL.

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Lil-bit
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 1999-09-21 12:22 PM


Sweet poem. Sounds like you have been bitten by the love bug!

A gentle word: don't type in all capital letters - makes it more harder to read.

Keep up the great writing!


TulipGirl48
Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 11
glendale, ca, usa
2 posted 1999-09-21 09:08 PM


Nice Poem.. I hope you're able to get your man =)

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"As time changes so do people..."
-WonderWoman


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