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Nan
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0 posted 09-20-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...and the saga continues - Here's one from my very wonderful daughter, Stacie...

Copper Care
by Stacia A. Ness

Copper Love ~ Copper Care
Sitting on his dresser there.
He loved us so with all his might,
Came home late but tucked us in tight.
Catch a smile with such a glow ~
So small with more love than you'll ever know.
A walk in the afternoon
Or watch the flowering sunset 'til moon,
A movie or a late night show ~
Does he see we love him so?
He can not change but only regret
All the wasted years we've spent.
If we could go back to the day he could spare
His Copper Love and his Copper Care.
.......................We love you, Dad



[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-20-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved
Artur Hawkwing
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1 posted 09-20-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Stacie or Stacia?

I really liked this poem. I am sorry whatever occurred, but it seems like you had a wonderful father. I truly wish you the best!
Nan
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2 posted 09-21-1999 07:44 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Artur - Her given name is Stacia - I call her Stacie - and her father was a good one for about 6 years - then he had more pressing issues in his life - though he never really was a very good husband....Ah well, c'est la vie, I guess....
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-21-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
A fool, is a fool, is a fool, like a rose is a rose. *L*
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Okay Nan....you must have the most poetic family on the face of the earth

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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It's all wonderful it seems - but the flair your family possesses for poetry is just amazing.

Letting you know I saw this!
 
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