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Lost in time..

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Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


0 posted 09-20-1999 07:45 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis


Lost in time,
Lost in space,
Lost in meaning.

The fragile heart,
Carries many pains,
Many feelings.

The soul it too,
Carries memories,
A pain that is bleeding.

Lost in the town,
Lost in the world,
Lost in feeling.

Fighting back now,
Gaining strength now,
An end to misery's feeding.

Fear of the unknown,
A serious overtone,
Fear of never feeling...

Rejoicing in love,
Rejoicing in life,
Rejoicing in the new meanings..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


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beowulf_26
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since 06-29-99
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1 posted 09-20-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

To think that this poem was almost lost in the pile! This definetly deserves another go round. Great job.
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 09-20-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

For one my friend, I think this is very well done!!! A lot of meaning is packed in here. Here you show the pain, and feelings, then you go into gaining strength and fighting back. I wouldn't change a thing! You did a great job!!! Really!
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


3 posted 09-20-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks to Beowolf and WhtDove, I tried something different for once, glad it was ok and understood!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


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