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Anticipatory Retraction

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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 09-20-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Bottom of the line
what does it all mean?
World of players
a one manned team.

What's in this big world?
So much to explore.
You have the key
but can't find the dor.

Answers to your questions
if you only knew,
the most challenging inquiry
who are you?

One deep breath
out for the ride,
searching for something
all fear aside.

On top of the world
what's up there for me?
A whole life ahead of you
totally free!
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Jay_Jay
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since 09-18-99
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA


1 posted 09-20-1999 04:44 PM       View Profile for Jay_Jay   Email Jay_Jay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jay_Jay

I love your poems, Echo. This one was very good...keep posting!!
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


2 posted 09-20-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you Jay...I will keep posting, I am glad you like my poems, and thank you for your comments on them all! I have yet to read one of your poems though! Do you write, or jsut read?
Nan
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3 posted 09-20-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nicely said, Echo - Keep 'me coming;..
beowulf_26
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4 posted 09-20-1999 09:48 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

Please keep writing as I enjoy your work immensely.
Beki
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since 09-15-99
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5 posted 09-20-1999 10:07 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

very inspiring
Paul Allen Lupien
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6 posted 09-21-1999 01:08 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

I echo the preceding replies...

PAL

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Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


7 posted 09-21-1999 02:35 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you for your comments...And for those who said to keep posting, don't worry I will!
 
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