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desperado
Member

since 1999-05-24

Posts 312
FT Hood,Tx

0 posted 1999-09-20 04:03 PM

let the music flow within your soul
spill the words from the cup of thought
dance to the beat of your own emotions
ignore the eyes of those who wish you harm
open your mind to the vision before you
close your eyes to the arrogance you hate
open your arms to the shadow you tried to destroy
the shadow that is you
listen not to the mouths of the popular
see not the pictures they want you to see
dance the dance that lives inside you
and let your spirit free
wipe away the tears you shed in dreams
as you gaze into the nothingness before you
as the mirror gazes back with eyes of pain
and try to love who you are

[This message has been edited by desperado (edited 09-20-1999).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-20 05:31 PM

Wow.....three lines....three lines and this poem went from being a good poem to a great poem:

"as you gaze into the nothingness before you
as the mirror gazes back with eyes of pain
and try to love who you are"

What a ending!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

pandora
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 184

2 posted 1999-09-20 07:01 PM

wonderful, des.... really really fine.... good advice and everything.... if it were only that easy

luv,pan

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-09-20 07:03 PM

I'll be what I'll be......

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

4 posted 1999-09-20 07:24 PM

Excellent...

..I don't know about love who you are, but certainly be comfortable with who you are and others will be comfortable with you...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

5 posted 1999-09-20 07:30 PM

Really like your thoughts here, some might be more difficult then others, but all are possible with our minds willing to accept positive reflection.

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