How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #2 Archive
 Old Fashioned Me
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Old Fashioned Me

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Alicat
Member Elite
since 05-23-99
Posts 4277
Coastal Texas


0 posted 09-20-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

A rose and candy given to thee,
Initials carved on willow tree;
Hand in hand in sunny park,
Low whispers till after dark.

Together we go to the matinee;
We think of each thoughout the day.
We watch the animals in the clouds
And laugh at the busy rush-hour crowds.

We see sun set and rising moon
Planning for our day in June.
Old fashioned is what we'll ever be
As we dream beneath the willow tree.


Alicat
© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
Senior Member
since 06-23-99
Posts 1896
Florida


1 posted 09-20-1999 03:51 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

This is lovely...My sweet old fashioned gentleman. One of the many reasons why you hold my heart.
Alicat
Member Elite
since 05-23-99
Posts 4277
Coastal Texas


2 posted 09-20-1999 04:07 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

As you hold mine, my soul's desire.


Alicat, the melted, gooey, gushy, smushy, twitterpated kilted kitty
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


3 posted 09-20-1999 04:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

May an eavesdropper agree!? Well done!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 09-20-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very fitting to the title...nicely done

------------------
"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Munda
Member Elite
since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


5 posted 03-05-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

3 and 4 makes 34
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #2 >> Old Fashioned Me Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors