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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-20-1999 12:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Here I am
in Open forum
with no sense
of decorum
because
on page one
I'm stuck.
I've read
every poem
on page one
but could reply
to none
and that
is truly
rotten
luck.

I'm tempted
to rail and curse
with my
exquisite verse,
against
this unmerciful fate.
I find 11 hours
without the forum
and my mind
cowers,
it's being
up again
does elate.

Thanks much Ron!


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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1 posted 09-20-1999 01:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Besides the cursing part, I felt the same way.
THANKS RON!!!

Sunshine
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since 06-25-99
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Listening to every heart


2 posted 09-20-1999 01:49 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ditto!
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


3 posted 09-20-1999 03:21 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

That's okay, WhtDove... I cursed enough for both of us! LOL. One long drawn out, nearly never ending "Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, shoot!" is cursing... right? *G*

DE: Well done... I wonder if there's a Betty Ford clinic for poetry addicts? *G*
beowulf_26
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4 posted 09-20-1999 08:20 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

I really liked this poem. Unfortunatly, I'm a bit confused about why you couldn't respond to the poems. Did you feel that none of them were worthy of response? Or is there something else I'm missing?
DreamEvil
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5 posted 09-20-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The forums were shut down with me inside. I could read everthing but not reply.
beowulf_26
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6 posted 09-20-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

thanks. I was quite confused.
Beki
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7 posted 09-20-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

OHMYGOD! Like Being locked in the Library all night! LOL Wish I'd been locked in with you..what fun we could have had chasing each other through the forums! I enjoyed this poem, by the way! :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


8 posted 09-20-1999 11:26 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Should have done what I did: sent Ron a guilt trip!
Lucie
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9 posted 09-21-1999 12:12 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

you too huh Chris..heheh
Ron
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10 posted 09-21-1999 12:21 AM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

Tricky move, DE, getting yourself locked in that way... I can think of some Twilight Zone type twists that could make for a very interesting story!

Christopher & Lucie (and Toe, too) - I didn't think of your missives as guilt trips, but rather as keeping me company during a very long and boring vigil. Besides, guilt doesn't work well on me - I've been married too many times (sort of like vaccinations, ya know).
Artur Hawkwing
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11 posted 09-21-1999 01:05 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

DreamEvil- Believe it or not, I was locked in also! I enjoyed the entire Library!
DreamEvil
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12 posted 09-21-1999 06:26 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

*sniff, sniff*
Artur, 'tis glad I am that I was not alone. LOL

Ron, I was thinking the twilight zone had descended upon me, but at least I got to read some excellent verse. Being stuck for 11 hours did have me re-running some Tales From The Darkside as well.

Thamk you everyone for your sympathy. It just chokes me up. (sob)

LOL

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

RainbowGirl
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13 posted 09-21-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Ron: ROFL @ I've been married too many times (sort of like vaccinations, ya know).


hmmmmm...That was a much needed reminder...my next injection is due..*g*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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