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The Glass Dome

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Lil-bit
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since 08-03-99
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0 posted 09-19-99 11:34 PM       View Profile for Lil-bit   Email Lil-bit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil-bit

Feelings of isolation
Feelings of despair
She wondered how she got there

A porcelain doll she was not
She could hear and see
She wondered, "Whats happened to me"?

Her life that she had known
Was long gone
Now, trapped in the dome

She longed for touch
Not a little
But VERY much

Its great to talk and hear
Of all the things so dear
Please break the glass and whisper in my ear

You look great I see
I want to feel you close to me
And hold you oh so near


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Rand al'Thor
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since 09-19-99
Posts 32
Rochester, NY, USA


1 posted 09-21-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for Rand al'Thor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rand al'Thor's Home Page   View IP for Rand al'Thor

It is interesting how so many people feel they are in a glass dome... I wonder if the glass can be broken without hurting the one inside?

I like this one.

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The rain it raineth on the just
And also on the unjust fella,
But chiefly on the just, because
The unjust steals the just's umbrella.
-- Lord Bowen
Julie
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since 08-20-99
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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:56 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Good point Rand.
Liked this poem, I can relate!

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


 
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