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Open Poetry #2

The Glass Dome

Lil-bit
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 29
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 1999-09-19 11:34 PM

Feelings of isolation
Feelings of despair
She wondered how she got there

A porcelain doll she was not
She could hear and see
She wondered, "Whats happened to me"?

Her life that she had known
Was long gone
Now, trapped in the dome

She longed for touch
Not a little
But VERY much

Its great to talk and hear
Of all the things so dear
Please break the glass and whisper in my ear

You look great I see
I want to feel you close to me
And hold you oh so near

Rand al'Thor
Junior Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 32
Rochester, NY, USA

1 posted 1999-09-21 12:34 PM

It is interesting how so many people feel they are in a glass dome... I wonder if the glass can be broken without hurting the one inside?

I like this one.

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The rain it raineth on the just
And also on the unjust fella,
But chiefly on the just, because
The unjust steals the just's umbrella.
-- Lord Bowen

Julie
Senior Member

since 1999-08-20

Posts 739
Houston, TX

2 posted 1999-09-22 01:56 PM

Good point Rand.
Liked this poem, I can relate!

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare

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