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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois

0 posted 1999-09-19 11:22 PM


I know right now you're hurting,
As sometimes we will do.
Soon things will turn around,
Your love will come to you.
So hang on and pray real hard,
And wish with all your might.
May your prayers be answered,
And all things turn out right.

© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-19 11:27 PM


Very sweet and heartfelt, Whitedove. This was nice to read.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 1999-09-19 11:31 PM


WhtDove,
a lovely little poem.

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
3 posted 1999-09-20 12:33 PM


What a nice prayer/wish/poem. *S*
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-09-20 12:55 PM


Thank you again WhtDove.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-09-20 01:41 PM


YEAH!!! We're back!!!

Thank you Severn!

Seymour, Suthern thank you!

Dream again your welcome!


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-09-20 05:04 PM


Wonderfully done Whtdove

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-09-20 06:40 PM


WhtDove, such a lovely poem

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-09-20 07:00 PM


Great job WhtDove, I love the loving behind the words...:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
9 posted 1999-09-20 07:45 PM


Thanks Hoot!

Thanks DA and Isis! For your comments.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 1999-09-21 06:55 PM


What great loving words there...what a dear poem!!

Thanks!!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
11 posted 1999-09-21 08:00 PM


Thank you kindly Justbleu! thanks to all of you!
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