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Another Romantic Ditty

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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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0 posted 09-19-99 10:35 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

She held my hand
as we walked
to the fair,
laughing,
with her head
held high
and nary
a care.
The cold
autumn morning,
overcast and storming,
couldnít cause despair,
while
her heartwarming
smile
made every mile
fly
beneath my feet.
She
makes me complete
and whole
you know,
I guess
itís true
that you reap
what you sow.

I canít believe
sheíll be gone
in the morning.
will our
new-found love
die aborning?
Wonders abound
with the love
Iíve found.
Overwhelmed
by desire
that climbs
ever higher,
I soon found,
by love
I was bound
and had
no desire
to win myself free.
God
bless this life
and itís majesty.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-19-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'm smiling!! Your happiness means much to me, you know! Keep the faith...it will not let you down.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Lucie
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since 06-20-99
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Houston


2 posted 09-19-99 10:42 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I like this whimsical side of you.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


3 posted 09-19-99 10:42 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I too am glad for your happiness, Dream..it seems love is blossoming quite a bit here at passions.. Nice work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Severn
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since 07-17-99
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4 posted 09-19-99 10:44 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Another stunning piece...You don't write duds, that's for sure!!
Beki
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5 posted 09-19-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This is VERY nice Dreamevil...I like this side of you :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
U K Hero
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since 08-08-99
Posts 271
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6 posted 09-20-1999 03:23 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

What a refreshing piece keep this up and weíll be calling dreamíangel
beowulf_26
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since 06-29-99
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7 posted 09-20-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for beowulf_26   Email beowulf_26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for beowulf_26

Having read a fair number of you works I sit here in awe. Yes your word usage is great, the emotion is there, the poetry flows coherently. But what makes my jaw drop to the floor is the fact that you are so versatile. You seem to have full command over all forms and styles of poetry whether they be short concise lines or cycling poetry. My hat is off. I have much to learn.
DreamEvil
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8 posted 09-20-1999 09:52 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My wife and I are working things out for everyone's benefit. Thank you much for responding.

beowulf_26, such is my goal.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


9 posted 09-21-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Ohhhh that is sooo sweet!! I likes!! I am happy for you!!!!


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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


10 posted 09-21-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Shucks I don't know how I missed this one! To envision you floating off your feet, on love cloud #9. What a treat it is! Good poem too!
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