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Wanting Someone (Please tell me what you think)

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The Keeper Of Keys
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0 posted 09-19-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

The world spins round everyday
Each day passes farther and farther away
The last warming of my heart fades as well
And I'm left alone in love's dry spell
Just when I feel that it's been too long
And nobody cares to be a part of my song
I saw you dancing alone and quiet and still
I admired and watched and for you my heart began to will
Now I'm lost in your sweet essence
I hope you urn to be in my prescense
It's clear to me that you are in pain
You must feel like you yourself are completely in vain
Hurt no more for you deserve great bliss
Kiss me my princess, for I am your prince.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

© Copyright 1999 The Keeper Of Keys - All Rights Reserved
PhaerieChild
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1 posted 09-19-99 10:33 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Keeper, this is a keeper. It's beautiful! Going from such disparaging sadness to a tremendous hope. It's great!

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

The Keeper Of Keys
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2 posted 09-19-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Oh c'mon guys, no replies?

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

The Keeper Of Keys
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3 posted 09-19-99 10:36 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Thanks WildChild for your reply, it really means a lot. Isnt hope such a beautiful thing?

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Alwye
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In the space between moments


4 posted 09-19-99 10:36 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

well, this certainly deserves replies!! Beautiful, beautiful work!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 09-19-99 10:58 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I can truly feel this ! That's about the way it goes - just about the time you think there is no hope...someone wonderful comes skipping by! And oh what a feeling to find a new love !! Truly can relate, and you captured the moment well....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


searchingon
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6 posted 09-20-1999 02:58 PM       View Profile for searchingon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for searchingon

The yearning was there, pushing through to the surface.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-20-1999 05:12 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Keeper.....this is beautiful, I for one can certainly relate to it. Thanks for sharing!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Beki
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8 posted 09-20-1999 06:09 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Good poem, happy for you...and way envious because I am "wanting someone" too :-)
The Keeper Of Keys
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9 posted 09-20-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Thanks everyone, i must say this is the most replies ive ever gotten. You are all so great. desire: such a tremendous thing...

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Justbleu
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10 posted 09-21-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

What beautiful thoughts you have!!!
Sweet and sad all at the same time!!
Loved it!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

WhtDove
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11 posted 09-21-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What a treasure Keeper! Something I think we can all relate to! Great job.
The Keeper Of Keys
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12 posted 09-22-1999 10:03 AM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Thank you again everyone, honestly. Life and love, such precious things...

I'm enjoying all of your posts people, keep it up...



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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Toerag
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13 posted 09-22-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yo Keep....I too like this one....You're not a frog are ya?.....Just kidding....but sometimes ya gotta hop farther, ribbet louder, and shed a few warts before ya do indeed attract that princess to get a kiss. And all of us sometime in our life is at least a Prince or a Princess for a day!
DBeth
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14 posted 09-22-1999 11:06 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

I love it! Keeper you've done an excellent job with this one.I believe we have all been there at some point in our lives.Not being able to tell the one you want how you feel is very hard.Anyways...Good job!

DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.
moonmoon
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15 posted 09-22-1999 01:42 PM       View Profile for moonmoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonmoon


I agree with the rest..You have done justice to this feeling lot of us here share..
The Keeper Of Keys
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16 posted 09-22-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

I'm going for it guys, im giving it to her and im telling her how i feel. she deserves more than what shes got right now, i gotta make her smile.

here goes nothing


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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

 
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