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Purple PAssion...a tanka poem

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Beki
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0 posted 09-19-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

Likewise I posted this in fantasy forum, zero reads so I brought it here:


Purple Passion

first breath of lilac
permeates the early dawn
promises passion
as we rise in purple air
dragons sing our soft desire


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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 09-20-1999 04:44 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely done...I can see that you, unlike me, are well studied in the art of verse

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Pepper
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2 posted 09-20-1999 05:15 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

really enjoyed the visual of this piece Beki.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Beki
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3 posted 09-20-1999 10:50 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thank you, Hoot and Pepper...since I have been writing and studying poetry for over thirty years it is somewhat gratifying to know it shows :-) Truthfuklly though, the one thing that really improves your writing is just that...READ good poetry and KEEP WRITING!!!!! You have some good work Hoot...Pepper, I don't recall ever seeing anything by you...do you write?
Pepper
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4 posted 09-21-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Beki...how I wish I had the talent to write...but alas I only have the talent to enjoy the wonders of the written word. My dear friend, Balladeer introduced me to this forum and for that I will always be grateful. I have found such pleasure in the incredible talent that is here.......

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