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She Understands

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-19-99 09:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The first tears fell like a torrential rain.
The first to notice my tears was my wife.
It tore at her heart to see me in pain.
My tears hit her with the hurt in my life.

She asked, "For her?", so I nodded my head.
She held me tight and gave me sympathy.
I will always carry the words she said.
"I know that you love her much more than me."

Those ringing words I just couldn't deny.
Nothing I could say would be sufficient.
We held each other close as we did cry.
I knew once she was so beneficient.

She told me something I already knew.
She told me that she had found another.
The times true love comes along are too few.
She promised I would be with my other.

For the pain she caused she would step aside.
So much was she moved by my face of grief.
Such things are not mine alone to decide.
Knowing she understands is a relief.

With a caring smile she took my hand.
Once again tears were spilling from my eyes.
I thank God for helping her understand.
The heart always knows what the mind denies.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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Lucie
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1 posted 09-19-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I was moved by the sadness of this poem. I hope that all in your life works out the way that you want it to. I pray that you will be reunited with your love.
Michael
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2 posted 09-19-99 10:01 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is a powerful piece DreamEvil. Been in a similiar situation although no understanding ever came. I love the final stanza i.e. the last line. That is soooo true. Wonderful words, my friend.

Michael
WhtDove
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3 posted 09-19-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Tears, man it brought tears to my eyes! Very well done! I bet this was hard to write. I really can think of nothing else to say, I am at a loss of word, feeling this!
caroline
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4 posted 09-19-99 10:11 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is truly one of your very best, Dream. The emotion is overwhelming. You and yours are always in my thoughts...I wish the very best for you, my friend.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Systematic Decay
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5 posted 09-19-99 10:13 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow........thats one of those poems that leaves you grasping for words....unsuccessfully I might add
Tara Simms
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6 posted 09-19-99 10:30 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Sounds like you will soon have your freedom. Then you and one voice can be together. Congratulations.

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-20-1999 04:47 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written Scott

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Iloveit
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8 posted 09-20-1999 04:57 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

made me cry, wow, what a story, and how beautifully written....one love ends, another begins....good luck *sigh* yep good luck, I barely know of you, but it is so good to see your heart soar in love....beautiful!
RainbowGirl
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9 posted 09-20-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Dream:.....You can't find the words unless your heart is awake and it seems yours is..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Severn
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10 posted 09-20-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

United in our silly dazes. I feel your pain, Dream - I really hope your dreams come true.
Isis
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11 posted 09-20-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I too feel your pain Dream, a beautifully told piece... The sun will shine again my friend,
for another will see the wonderful man inside..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Dark Angel
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12 posted 09-20-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Soul-brother, this was very beautiful and so very sad,brought tears to my eyes.I wish all the very best for you soul-brother of mine

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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