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A Wish For Loneheart..

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Isis
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0 posted 09-19-99 08:56 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

The Knight of Doves is alone right now,
Feeling unloved and in pain,
Here's hoping the Fragile Rose,
Can ease his burden so the Knight can smile again.

The Rose, she offers her friendship,
Straight from her pure heart,
She offers baskets of understanding,
That seems a wise place to start.

The Rose then offers a shoulder to cry on,
A sympathetic ear,
She hopes her laughter and friendship,
Can squash her Knight's deepest fears.

Fragile of heart herself hoping her caring ways,
Can strengthen theis knight's soul,
Can show him he is not alone these days,
The feelings of despair haven't taken their toll.

For already she has learned to see ,
The Knight's soul shining within,
Full of wisdom and beauty,
A friendship so freely given.

The Rose just wants to remind the Knight,
That she is there for him,
No longer alone will he have to fight,
She hopes his recovery will soon begin.

Sir Loneheart, this Fragile Rose hopes that you know,
You now have a new loving friend,
To talk to when feeling low,
Her loving and understanding she does send!

[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 09-19-99).]
You can edit more than once - no problem...

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-19-99).]
See???

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-19-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 09-19-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Hey you can't edit things twice!!!
So the last line should read 'Her loving and understanding she does send!'...

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-20-1999 05:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Isis.....I hope he appreciates this one...you are very kind.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Saxoness
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3 posted 09-20-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I too, second your poem isis, we are al there for him.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Isis
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4 posted 09-20-1999 09:25 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Hope you get to read this soon my friend..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Isis
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5 posted 09-22-1999 02:23 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I thought you were going to read it right away Lone heart>>? Naughty man, hope you HAVE read it and just didn't leave a comment!!

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


WhtDove
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6 posted 09-22-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Isis, this was great. Emotional and caring piece. Very good!
Isis
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7 posted 09-22-1999 06:30 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Thanks WhtDove, I just don't think Loneheart has read it yet!!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Loneheart
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8 posted 09-22-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

The moon fills my eyes with sorrow Fair maid life blossoms all around this knight
Yet my world is darkened where is mine light that I shall find my way
Thy presence enlightens my soul fragile rose true friendship is a thing to be cherished
And cherish it I shall thy poem given freely unto this knight shall I hold close unto mine heart
Thy friendship fills mine heart with light the flowers with all their majesty burst around me
Truly it is easier to find ones way when two or more candles burn bright
I honor thee fair rose not only for thy caring heart but for such a beautiful poem as well
Thy Servant
Loneheart


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Loneheart
Isis
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9 posted 09-22-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Glad you finally read my little poem my friend.
Thy Fragile Rose..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Loneheart
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10 posted 09-22-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

I would have read it much sooner Isis but my job takes me away many days at a time
But as I stated earlier it is truly lovely again thank you for thy friendship

Isis
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11 posted 09-22-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Check your email Houston, we have a problem..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


 
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