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CSwtThng
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 124


0 posted 1999-09-19 07:29 PM


We love one another
Keep our distance
I'm headstrong and stubborn
You keep your persistence

I say things are fine
You say you want more
Things get too serious
I head for the door

You want a relationship
But I am torn
Between past and present
Emotions forlorn

I need your love
It gives me security
Where I see perfection
You see impurity

We are so different
Yet still the same
We share our dreams
Of fortune and fame

What's wrong with things
The way they are now
I can't do relationships
I just don't know how

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-20 04:38 PM


Veyr sad sometimes we tend to see things that aren't there....Love doesn't look for the imperfections, but rather sees perfection where there is none

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-21 06:57 PM


Oh so sad...I have been there!! Nice poem!!

Thank You!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


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