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If it ain't broke don't fix it

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CSwtThng
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since 07-28-99
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0 posted 09-19-99 07:29 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CSwtThng

We love one another
Keep our distance
I'm headstrong and stubborn
You keep your persistence

I say things are fine
You say you want more
Things get too serious
I head for the door

You want a relationship
But I am torn
Between past and present
Emotions forlorn

I need your love
It gives me security
Where I see perfection
You see impurity

We are so different
Yet still the same
We share our dreams
Of fortune and fame

What's wrong with things
The way they are now
I can't do relationships
I just don't know how
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 09-20-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Veyr sad sometimes we tend to see things that aren't there....Love doesn't look for the imperfections, but rather sees perfection where there is none

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
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2 posted 09-21-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Oh so sad...I have been there!! Nice poem!!

Thank You!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu

 
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