little guy on the flip side(short and a little funny)

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little guy on the flip side(short and a little funny)

Jim Raynor
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA

0 posted 1999-09-19 06:53 PM

I love you said and wasnt meant inspired hopes and fears strike your soul with unknow power,

enough to drive the little guy to the flip side

-Jim
P.S. i wrote this one just as a little joke not a real funny one but just got bored and thought of something like this

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Jim Raynor
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA

1 posted 1999-09-19 06:54 PM

I did not mean to submit it twice it was a accident it took to long to upload so i pushed stop than backed and pushed submit again SO SORRY

-Jim

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-19 07:06 PM

Laughs.....either you're gonna like me or you're gonna hate me here.....again....

"I love you," said
and it wasn't meant.
It inspired hopes and fears,
struck your soul with unknown power...
enough to drive the little guy
to the flip side.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Jim Raynor
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA

3 posted 1999-09-19 07:11 PM

your right once again hahahah im not mad i like people to tell me what i do wrong especially from females there smarter than any male i have every seen

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-19 07:20 PM

I'm glad to see you have a sense of humor. Actually you have some very good dieas, just need to work on the presentaion a bit....feel free to e-mail me if you want or need suggestions on anything. Always willing to help out a fellow poet. By the way, I don't think I've said it yet....Welcome to the group!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Jim Raynor
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA

5 posted 1999-09-19 07:22 PM

thanks im glad to be in the group this is fun reading and writing

-jim

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