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Love so strong your heart aches

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Jim Raynor
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since 09-19-99
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Churubusco Indiana USA


0 posted 09-19-99 06:37 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

I sit here all alone wondering why you left me, why we couldnt be together,why you hated me,

but one day i woke up and i realized you were gone the one thing i ever loved left me alone in the shadows of my home,

the fear that you might get hurt with out me there,

the fear that you might have no one's shoulder to cry on,

the fear that our two souls would never meet again, my love for you so strong that my heart aches when your gone.

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Jim Raynor
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Churubusco Indiana USA


1 posted 09-19-99 06:38 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

oh man i screwed up the titled it should be love so strong my heart aches not your

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Jim.....another very beautiful piece of work....but again, I would like to suggest a bit of a different format....as always, merely a suggestion:

I sit here all alone
wondering why you left me,
why we couldnt be together,
why you hated me.
But one day I woke up
and I realized you were gone
the one thing I ever loved,
left me alone in the shadows of my home.
I fear that you might get hurt
with out me there.
I fear that you might
have no one's shoulder to cry on.
I fear that our two souls
will never meet again.
My love for you so strong,
that my heart aches when your gone.



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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Jim Raynor
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since 09-19-99
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA


3 posted 09-19-99 07:13 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

i will get use to this after a while im just slow i guess hehehe thanks for the help no really thanks

-Jim

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