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Troll King
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since 1999-09-18
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0 posted 1999-09-19 05:55 PM


walking down a graveyard just thinking about all the dead that surrounds you. grabbing your dad's hand harder, looking at all the names. you stop in front of 2 graves. you stand still and quietly. remembering all the happy times you spent with you grandparents. tears start to come down your face. you wonder why, why did they die? now your grandparents are gone for the rest of your life. turning to your dad, you look into his deep dark black eyes. you both walkaway slowly. suddenly, you run back and drop to your knees. from in your jacket you take out 2 red roses and place them on the graves. saying to yourself "i shall seek your justice grandma and grandpa. i shall not fail you both. i promise." slowly standing up, thick fog begins to roll in the cementary. walking back to the car all you think about is the promise you just made.

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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 1999-09-19 09:04 PM


Troll

Justice? Meaning your grandparents were killed? Or am I guilty of thinking this is true but perhaps is just a thought?

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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2 posted 1999-09-19 09:14 PM


Troll, (HUGS) to such a sad soul..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



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