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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-09-19 04:22 PM


I live with you in my mind
I feel you here in my heart
each day has 24 hours
and yet - we live apart

I dance around my words
too scared to speak as I feel
the world continues on
yet nothing to me feels real

The invisible love that pulls me
is made of strings of finest gold
I am what I am
my emotions - so hard to control

I wake each day - sleep each night
hour in hour out - spent apart
at night I dream, my head on a pillow
separately, but close in heart....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 1999-09-19 04:27 PM


This is great RainbowGirl, I can relate to this. Well written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-19-99).]

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
2 posted 1999-09-19 04:27 PM


sigh ... I know the feeling ...

Is it just me, or is EVERYONE in this place in love long-distance?

This was lovely, Rainbow ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")



RainbowGirl
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3 posted 1999-09-19 04:52 PM


Thanks...I was thinking aloud with my fingers..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-09-19 05:19 PM


Absolutely beautiful Rainbow Girl...has that nasty bug bitten you too. All this spring fever going around and it's nearly fall
I can relate to this one big time

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-09-19 06:21 PM


Thank you, Rainbow, for sharing your feelings about me with everyone here....hehehe..well, I can dream, can't I?!
Jim Raynor
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since 1999-09-19
Posts 63
Churubusco Indiana USA
6 posted 1999-09-19 06:25 PM


Wow thats all i can say thats a great poem...

-Jim

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$*%Jim Raynor%*$

RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-09-19 07:02 PM


Hoot: My lips are sealed...

HUGS

Balladeer: Of course you may dream...

HUGS

Jim:..Bless you...it's great when your thoughts reach out to others..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-19-99).]

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
8 posted 1999-09-20 02:12 PM


wow, the feeling the poem gives you is of love and caring, and then that last line just stays in your mind, beautiful!
JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
9 posted 1999-09-21 04:00 AM


I love the way you think with your fingers ...

The professors in the academy say, "Do not make the model more beautiful than she is," and my soul whispers, "O if you could only paint the model as beautiful as she really is."

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
10 posted 1999-09-21 05:50 AM


lovely Rainbow.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
Posts 214
san diego, ca.
11 posted 1999-09-21 05:54 AM


RainbowGirl,
Beautiful poem. Concise and perfect, too. Thank you.
Tyson

RainbowGirl
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12 posted 1999-09-21 12:32 PM


Iloveit: Thanks..

HUSG

JTF: In Red, White and Blue?..*g*..ooops

HUSG

Pepper: Thanks..

HUGS

Johnt300: Thank you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
13 posted 1999-09-21 01:58 PM


RG, you mean the Union Jack ?
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