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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-19-99 04:22 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I live with you in my mind
I feel you here in my heart
each day has 24 hours
and yet - we live apart

I dance around my words
too scared to speak as I feel
the world continues on
yet nothing to me feels real

The invisible love that pulls me
is made of strings of finest gold
I am what I am
my emotions - so hard to control

I wake each day - sleep each night
hour in hour out - spent apart
at night I dream, my head on a pillow
separately, but close in heart....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-19-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is great RainbowGirl, I can relate to this. Well written

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-19-99).]
Skyfyre
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2 posted 09-19-99 04:27 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

sigh ... I know the feeling ...

Is it just me, or is EVERYONE in this place in love long-distance?

This was lovely, Rainbow ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


RainbowGirl
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3 posted 09-19-99 04:52 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks...I was thinking aloud with my fingers..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-19-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful Rainbow Girl...has that nasty bug bitten you too. All this spring fever going around and it's nearly fall
I can relate to this one big time

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Balladeer
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5 posted 09-19-99 06:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Thank you, Rainbow, for sharing your feelings about me with everyone here....hehehe..well, I can dream, can't I?!
Jim Raynor
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6 posted 09-19-99 06:25 PM       View Profile for Jim Raynor   Email Jim Raynor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jim Raynor's Home Page   View IP for Jim Raynor

Wow thats all i can say thats a great poem...

-Jim

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$*%Jim Raynor%*$
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 09-19-99 07:02 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hoot: My lips are sealed...

HUGS

Balladeer: Of course you may dream...

HUGS

Jim:..Bless you...it's great when your thoughts reach out to others..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.




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Iloveit
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8 posted 09-20-1999 02:12 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow, the feeling the poem gives you is of love and caring, and then that last line just stays in your mind, beautiful!
JTF
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9 posted 09-21-1999 04:00 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I love the way you think with your fingers ...

The professors in the academy say, "Do not make the model more beautiful than she is," and my soul whispers, "O if you could only paint the model as beautiful as she really is."
Pepper
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10 posted 09-21-1999 05:50 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

lovely Rainbow.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
johnt300
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11 posted 09-21-1999 05:54 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

RainbowGirl,
Beautiful poem. Concise and perfect, too. Thank you.
Tyson
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12 posted 09-21-1999 12:32 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: Thanks..

HUSG

JTF: In Red, White and Blue?..*g*..ooops

HUSG

Pepper: Thanks..

HUGS

Johnt300: Thank you..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JTF
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13 posted 09-21-1999 01:58 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

RG, you mean the Union Jack ?
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