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Star Fairy 2
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0 posted 09-19-99 03:57 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Star Fairy 2

Sparks at first glance
Eyes grip and hold in a trance
Touch ignites flickers at first chance
Taken aback by that sexy stance
Sparks and flickers grow to flames
Great needs and fantasy desires
Love taking on an incredible claim
Starting and feeding flaming fires

Every sight, every touch, every smell
Flooding through the very love well
Like sparkles and stars and witches spell
Unexplained and highly infidel

But strong and overpowering
Like little tiny bee stings
But with pleasure that happiness brings
Like birds singing, and wanting bird wings

BUT THEN...

Flames being rained out
Ultimately dying from a passion drought
Rainy days try to hang about
BUt will make way for sunny skies, here on out.


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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--
© Copyright 1999 Rakhee - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
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1 posted 09-21-1999 12:49 AM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

i would like some comment on this one..

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"If to rectify your demeanor,
You must imitate another,
Your philosiphy on morality
Is a burden on your mentality,
Your actions based on popularity,
Will never fulfill you internally,
Cuz the world was not blessed with equality,
But rather with fake geniality.
--823--
Artur Hawkwing
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2 posted 09-21-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

I had to read three times to catch all the points, but I think I have most of them. The topic is accurate, and the first three speak of lust obsession then the last stanza shows how pointless lust is without love.

I'm sorry but my mind's weakening, getting tired (it's 2:36 a.m.!).. take care.

[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 09-21-1999).]
Pepper
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3 posted 09-21-1999 07:30 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

really well written with poinant points made.....very good Star Fairy

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 09-21-1999 08:02 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I like this poem..Though it is 5:00A.M. and I have yet to sleep, so I am not thinking too clearly when it comes to typing or what I want to say. So I will leave it as great poem!
Star Fairy 2
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5 posted 09-21-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

Thank you very much!
 
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