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CSwtThng
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0 posted 09-19-99 01:44 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CSwtThng

Long Division

Why are things so hard for me
Fog so dense I can hardly see

The only light starts to fade
My concerns have been outweighed

I'm so full of despair
Damages I can't repair

A verdict that cannot be swayed
Consequences I can't evade

A hole in my heart oh so deep
Must I stay alone and weep

I feel I've grown so very weak
Has my sadness reached its peak

Will I live to tell my story
Will I rise to shine in glory

Or has my fate been predecided
Heart and soul seem divided

How can I face tomorrow
Filled with such pain and sorrow
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1 posted 09-26-1999 12:00 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think this is an excellent expression of feelings that all of us have from time to time. I like the form of the poem also! And good choice of words!

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