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Trynete
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0 posted 09-19-99 01:38 PM       View Profile for Trynete   Email Trynete   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Trynete's Home Page   View IP for Trynete

Sorry I have no title.

I feel like I'm gonna' drown,
I feel like something is holding me down.
Why can't I see?
Why can't I feel love,
why can't I feel anything?
Why me?
Why not someone like you?
What did I ever do?
Everyday I write,
with my pen is how i decide to fight.
I'm half hangin' out window,
and I'm half in,
when is it my turn to win?
Why do I remember all of the
bad times,
and none of the good?
Does one over-power the other?
Is that why?

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To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life.
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1 posted 09-26-1999 11:57 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done. Good questions, too. I think, and I know it's a struggle, that you have to force yourself to set your mind on what is good! It takes practice. One step at a time, as it were! Let me know how you make out!

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-26-1999).]
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